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for His voice is like a Mars-bar

by dutchbuffy2305

person Bella
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, though it ended a lot too soon in the story. The ending just jumped out un expected. You're a great writer
person Kiristeen
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya,

I'm enjoying the story, but part of it has been cut off.

Thanks,
Kiri