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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god this story is great! ive forgone sleep to finish it so please update soon!!!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Did not see that coming. Wondering how they'll manage afterwards. Great new chapter. As soo glad you're writing again.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What an amazing story!!!!! I hadn't read a spuffy fic with this setting yet before, so kudos to you! I visited your website, and learned that your fic's based on a movie with same title, and now I think I may have to check that movie out!
I despertly need you to update as soon as possible! Like today or tomorrow! I serious!!!! I want more now! Please? Pretty please with a Spike on top? :-)
My only advice would be to tell readers on this site that the story is based on a movie, or at least the beginning of the movie. Because when I first read it here at AFF.net, I thought it was a completely original and clever idea. Not that I don't think you are an original and clever author, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Also I think you need to put a disclaimer at the top saying that several lines aren't yours, but are Jane Austen's. Several lines in your story are word-for-word out of Jane Austen's "Pride and Prejudice." Buffy reminded me of Elizabeth Bennett SO much, and William was Mr. Darcy, and even Clem reminded me of Mr. Bingham! Don't know if it was intentional, but I loved it all the same!
So please write more! I adore your story. I love it so much, I even offer to Beta read it for you! That is, if you don't have one already. But I offer up my services all the same!
Sam
I despertly need you to update as soon as possible! Like today or tomorrow! I serious!!!! I want more now! Please? Pretty please with a Spike on top? :-)
My only advice would be to tell readers on this site that the story is based on a movie, or at least the beginning of the movie. Because when I first read it here at AFF.net, I thought it was a completely original and clever idea. Not that I don't think you are an original and clever author, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Also I think you need to put a disclaimer at the top saying that several lines aren't yours, but are Jane Austen's. Several lines in your story are word-for-word out of Jane Austen's "Pride and Prejudice." Buffy reminded me of Elizabeth Bennett SO much, and William was Mr. Darcy, and even Clem reminded me of Mr. Bingham! Don't know if it was intentional, but I loved it all the same!
So please write more! I adore your story. I love it so much, I even offer to Beta read it for you! That is, if you don't have one already. But I offer up my services all the same!
Sam
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this...
It has great potental to go places. Will you be adding any more to the story, it would be a great shame to let it go without finishing.
Please update
It has great potental to go places. Will you be adding any more to the story, it would be a great shame to let it go without finishing.
Please update
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
where's the rest? you can't leave me hanging, hopeless romantic here i need to know what's going to happen!
i like your attempt at modeling parts of it on pride and pred, but if i could just point out your error in ch3 where you had buffy dressed frist thing in the morning in a ball gown. sorry just not done ..it should have been a (morning dress) as us brits would say..."it's just not on"
but i'm still loving the feel of the story...so keep writing
i like your attempt at modeling parts of it on pride and pred, but if i could just point out your error in ch3 where you had buffy dressed frist thing in the morning in a ball gown. sorry just not done ..it should have been a (morning dress) as us brits would say..."it's just not on"
but i'm still loving the feel of the story...so keep writing
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This n exn excellent story!! I'm dying for updates!
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really sweet story. Lots of great scenes and character interaction. You absolutely must continue and soon.
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far. Your plot and character development are coming along nicely. Can't wait for more. Please post soon.
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Although that last part dragged a bit. I can't wait until the next update. I hope that it is soon. Your writing is wonderful.