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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Are u goin type up some new chapters soon?
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Re Chapter 4: Enjoyed the chapter!
Your descriptiveness really helps the reader get inside the heads of the characters and bring them inte sce scene.
Great work! Update soon!
Your descriptiveness really helps the reader get inside the heads of the characters and bring them inte sce scene.
Great work! Update soon!
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
I could see Buffy acting *just* like this, she was such a jerk towards him. All he needed was some affection, my poor Spike. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Good work! I'm liking your style quite a bit : D
I could see Buffy acting *just* like this, she was such a jerk towards him. All he needed was some affection, my poor Spike. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Good work! I'm liking your style quite a bit : D
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You want reviews...so her is. is...Please don't leave it like this. Give me something to work with here. Bring the smut on full force! This is very exciting.
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Spike saying no to Buffy, I so love it. Maybe if he'd have done it in the show, then we would of gotten a really good ending instead of Spike just goin' up in flames.
I like this so far, can't wait to see what you do.
I like this so far, can't wait to see what you do.
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story seems to be going : ) Spand and Buffy's inner-turmoil is very well done.
Your writing is very eloquent and intelligent, I enjoyed reading the story so far.
Can't wait for more updates! : D
Your writing is very eloquent and intelligent, I enjoyed reading the story so far.
Can't wait for more updates! : D
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Spike tellin' her "no". Haha. Lovely... just lovely. Hope you keep Spike convicted in his plan... but, yanno, breaking just a little woulnd't hurt anything, right? 'Cause smooochies are always of the good. I can't wait to see more... so update A.S., \., 'kay???
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I like the way you built the tension and then sustained it. You have me on the edge of my seat.