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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i liked your story
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOOOL Well... everytime something has 1 star I check it out cause that probably means it pissed someone off... this is just badfic, was it intentional? Lol the first song was cheesy but there was one I thoughtld mld maybe work, where he's like "touch my body touch my sould, comebabybaby , lose control".... so , JOHN are you an aspiring singer? Hmm... wonder what could have motivated you to write the story about a guy named John...?
Seriously, no offesne John, I hope badfic was your intention cause this story SUCKED!!! It wasn't that fun to read but the badness of it makes me laugh, so I'm glad I read it. The only thing I didn't like was the way there was a kind of star-obsessed relationship and it was clearly a 'young girl' story, not a Buffy story, as in 'young childish not fully developed emotionally ' story. I know it said she was eighteen ,but it was pretty clear that the intention was. Also, you've tve to be pretty isoated to be an eighteen year old girl and actually think and act like that, fourteen would be more like it maybe minus the masturbation...where was I going with this?
Oh, yeah. I urge you to keep writing. Sorry your first review wasn't glowing, but at least you won't go around thinking you're great when you suck, which alot of people do (please don't insert 'yeah you' joke here). Writing isn't just for other people to read, it's cause it's fun! If it's not fun you shouldn't do it, and if you really like writing I hope to read more stories from you.
Seriously, no offesne John, I hope badfic was your intention cause this story SUCKED!!! It wasn't that fun to read but the badness of it makes me laugh, so I'm glad I read it. The only thing I didn't like was the way there was a kind of star-obsessed relationship and it was clearly a 'young girl' story, not a Buffy story, as in 'young childish not fully developed emotionally ' story. I know it said she was eighteen ,but it was pretty clear that the intention was. Also, you've tve to be pretty isoated to be an eighteen year old girl and actually think and act like that, fourteen would be more like it maybe minus the masturbation...where was I going with this?
Oh, yeah. I urge you to keep writing. Sorry your first review wasn't glowing, but at least you won't go around thinking you're great when you suck, which alot of people do (please don't insert 'yeah you' joke here). Writing isn't just for other people to read, it's cause it's fun! If it's not fun you shouldn't do it, and if you really like writing I hope to read more stories from you.
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June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting, I guess you could've been more detailed but it was a nice idea and pointless smoochies are always fun!