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for My Willow

by Eagleblaze

person saxman66
schedule January 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

  No problem.  Its a difficult situation to resolve with no real safe solution that everybody would be happy with unless you could restore Tara's humanity or possibly get her soul back.

 

  Given the speed your been writing the odd slip isn't surprising. ;)

person saxman66
schedule January 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

  I was talking about Ch 23 after Tara left the hospital having dropped Willow off.  She drains a women driver then and then a similiar one in Ch 24.

 

  Sounds like when Willow has recovered enough she's going to go hunting,  Although whether Tara can wait that long remains to be seen.  How their going to resolve Tara's need for blood with Willow's  revulsion at such behaviour I don't know.  Unless she can presuade Tara to change her diet.

person saxman66
schedule January 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

PS  Damn missed that final  bit that Tara has lost patience already.  Which is going to be messy with Buffy and probably some of the rest of the gang there.

person saxman66
schedule January 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

  Just to say you realise Tara killed a driver and got a car last episode as well?

 

  Otherwise well Willow is out of touch for Tara at the moment but what happens when she comes round?

person saxman66
schedule January 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

  Well I must admit at  the start I suspected Tara was going to save her by turning her but glad that didn't happen.  However she's taken a hell of a risk taking her to hospital.  Both in delaying treatment and in that Buffy and the gang are likely to hear about Willow which will put them on Tara's tail again.

person saxman66
schedule January 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

  Well dramatic and definitely going to draw the two of them together.  Willow is learning how powerful she is although lacking control and skill.  Jason is going to be a pile of dust very soon. 

person saxman66
schedule December 31, 2020 at 12:00 AM

  Well that was close but Willow's power is emerging quickly.  Tara is still in denial, although the  disaster when she trusted Willow before and it nearly cost her everything is obviously something she has to considered.

person Alexis_
schedule December 30, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Wow. I love this story! Tara as a vampire is so well written and cute and adorable and willow she's so ...human.

I love this story. I can't wait to read more about them.

Thank you for this.

Lots of love 💕

person saxman66
schedule December 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

  Well that was a quick response.  So the people being resecued have no significant role in the story.

  Sounds like Tara is losing her anger, which is good for Willow.  Willow has started using her magic so how that develops, especially once Tara realises how powerful Willow could be is going to be interesting.

person saxman66
schedule December 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

  Hell, hopefully your made a full recovery.  If not take it easy.  No point in risking your health.

  Interesting set up.  Tara and Willow are trying to find a new balance to their relationship.  Also can't remember any hostages at Tara's so interesting to find out who Buffy is helping.