lol, I feel like this in canon for Willow if the show was on Netflix. Very nice update, even if it was just world building stuff. Hope to read more soon.
Chapter 1 review, possible elements of other chapters too.
What I really enjoyed is the emotions, and the stupid bet that not only caused Buffy to own Faith but also to cause Buffy to become addicted to Faith's body- those results of their dumb really foolish bet these two teen women engaged in about who's the alpha girl.
I also really delight in their rivalry getting to *this* degree; that was fun of how it blew up to this idiotic degree- boy these two women need guidence and help to get out of their addiction to sodomizing oneanother in this; kudos and congratulations in regards to the quality of this- though it does seem really rather like the "Twilight Zone" in some ways. Hey, maybe Buffy will realize her life of being Faith's mistress (another idea I really rather enjoy in this series too- the television series and the stories)- their rivalry has finally blown up big time- borders on the "Twilight Zone", especially if someone who's got a parental relationship with her, like for instance R. Giles, Mrs. Summers, or Mr. Hank Summers, finds out that the blonde slayer is addicted to Faith's body, especially her butt ironically, and trying to guide her into true strength.
I really enjoyed deeply Buffy finding herself addicted to these bizarre "marital acts" she was performing with Faith, and likely has wife-like feelings for Faith- it's the feelings I really did enjoy and the views of these messed-up characters, messed up by their sins in this highly weird story overall.
Thank you for this tale throughout my entire person I extend gratitude to you for this tale, weird it is- and believe me, it is very weird, but what was happening is an excellent rendition of such a story.
With deep gratitude, sincerely one of your hopefully entirely too many fans;
Krulos.
P.S. As Buffy found out in this, sinful conduct is indeed *extremely* addictive, you got that exactly right, whether or not you intended to do so is unknown to me, but that's the fruits of following the fruits of actions, you get to see what's the what with anything really *before* you dine on it (sometimes extremely unwisely)!
I'm liking this quite a lot so far.
You're doing a good job writing both Buffy and Faith in this story, obviously taking the time and effort to let their personalities shine through.
So Faith's ashamed that she likes being sodomised? I geuss it doesn't match up with her tough girl attitude. But Buffy wants to collar her? Nice. I wonder if Buffy would get off on watching someone else use Faith?
We know Faith would, even if she wouldn't admit it. Willow perhaps? Maybe throw in Xander as well. Update soon.
Great story, besides the sex scenes I loved the dialogues between Buffy and Faith.
It would be nice to see Willow being involved in the story, perhaps helping Buffy fuck Faith.
Chap 3, very hot. Faith needs to learn to clean that dildo, get a good fisting and then get that tramp-stamp. She and Buffy will make a lovely couple.
Great to see chap2, looking forward to more soon. I cant wait for that tattoo. I want some serious Faith taming!
Was not expecting humor with my smut. Nice touch.
Super hot chap 1, can't wait to read more. Faith needs taming. With a tramp stamp and some fisting.
Hi,
i love all of your Buffy Female/Female stories.
Please keep going, you are an awesome writer.
Thanks :)