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for Not Looking For a Dad

by Jack-of-Spikes

schedule August 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for your review! I will fix this continuity issue asap and I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

person saxman66
schedule August 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

  Very hot and interesting combination.  One small continuity problem is what is Dawn doing pulling up her panties at the end when she arrived commando style?