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for The Cookie Monster

by LL72

schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

man i love this story. It's so hot. I'd love to see Tara get some of Ted's cookies. I know the story is set in early seasons, but still, it'd be hot. 

schedule May 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Kinda a mixed bag. Willow blowing a stranger while Buffy did her make up was in line with the dirty, and outlandish plot you've had going. Very much ejoyed it. But Xander & Jenny? Its hard to care about that one.

Being his teacher just doesn't have the same filthy aspect as Buffy, Willow, and Joyce with Snyder & Ted. Now, if it were Dawn I'd understand. But it seemed like a miss.

 

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person david15
schedule May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Incredible as always, I don't suppose we can see the scene where the Mayer fucked Jenny's virgin ass?

person Oric13
schedule May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 8: Good idea to bring Jenny Calender into things. She's a bit underrated IMO as she doesn't star in a lot of BtVS smut.

Anyhow, this was another fun chapter.

schedule May 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved this chapter.  Jenny is a great match.  Pairing her up with Xander is also has nice parallels to Snyder and Buffy.  I'd love to see a classroom scene with Xander, Jenny and Willow eventually.  Thanks for the update.  Now I'm going to go watch the section of Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered with Xander and Ms. Calendar.

schedule May 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Need an update! Still think with so many guys now, Buffy could have a real gag bang. Or Willow for that matter. Xander will need a girlfriend. As you taking requests? Cordy is always fun. Harmony too.

 

 

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schedule April 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

In need of an update! Do we get to vote on who Xander's new girlfriend will be? Is there a list?

schedule April 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I look forward to Cordeilia dragging Anya into things when we she wishes "I wish we got the same amount of cock as buffy summers" and the overeager Anya grants the wish before she realizes the implications. Also Faith welcomed in to the summers household, and dawn popping in out of nowhere ready for a "Sister" sandwich

person Oric13
schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 7: Fun chapter. The Xander/Joyce pairing makes for a nice change of pace.

schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Xander/Joyce, nice, with a DP including Ted. Very dirty. Can't wait to read more. Westley is showing up soon? So Kendra can't be that far behind. I wonder who will be Xander's girlfriend, and who will get the DP with Ted & him. Kendra? Cordy?

With three guys now in the mix, one of the girls could get a total gangbang. Update soon. Always a pleasure.

 

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