Chapter 14:
Well that's quite the way to end it. It's good to see you finished the story too. So many of the stories written on here just end suddenly without explanation. I do think there's an opportunity to do some interesting one shot stories with this one too if you were so inclined. I kinda feel like there's things to explore with the Dawn/Mayor relationship and perhaps the Dawn/Mayor/Faith relationship too. But that's just me. Regardless, good job.
Might I suggest that you do something similar with The A-Team? I would love to see how that ends.
Great story, thank you for sharing it!
Chapter 14: Very hot orgy scene. Guess this could be described as a "happy ending". ;)
This story was a lot of (smutty) fun.
Great story, this really was one of the best stories I've ever read, thank you very much.
Chapter 13: Buffy's displaying a lot more schoolspirit here than in "The Puppet Show" episode. ;)
Oooh, incest threesome for the school with Faith doing commentary. Nice. Cordy was jerking Xander off, while Harmony sucked off Snyder? Dirty too. But wasn't Willow next to Xander as well? She didn't get into the action?
So the acention is still coming. Do they know their going to be eaten?
): )
Chapter 12: I'm not entirely sure about the change involving magic and making the world different but at least you found a way to justify it. Most stories just go AU without even explaining it. What I wouldn't mind seeing is Faith getting involved in the fun, perhaps with Buffy or Dawn in the same way as Willow and Buffy had a thing.
Update?
Chapter 12: I like these lil glimpses of how normal nudity and sex has become in Sunnydale, like the mention of Dawn's photoshoot and of course the clothing check at Sunnydale High.
Also like that nothing is too depraved anymore for the Summers girls. That was a very hot orgy.
Chapter 11: Excellent chapter with loads of sexy scenes.
Good idea to tell this one from Dawn's POV.
I really liked the many examples how normal sex & nudity is now in Sunnydale.
Also happy that we finally got to see Buff in action at her new job.