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by LL72

schedule July 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That is a really hot, kinky idea. I love it. I really like the way you've played with the characters and expanded the cast to include Janice and her mom and so many others - though I'd like to know who some more of them are. And I really love how you've suggested the idea of a Faith/Dawn relationship conning from all the kinkyness as well as working up Willow/Tara and I adore kinky, slutty Joyce. This works for me at a lot of levels (mmmmm airtight Cordy and Tara!) but I still wish your descriptions of the sex were a little less... mechanical and a bit more emotional and sensual and about how your characters are feeling when their having all this kinky sex.  I'd love to know how Dawn felt when her anal cherry got popped or how Cordy or Tara felt when they got made airtight. But whatever - it's your fic.

Hope we get to see what Willow has in mind for next weekend. Three airtight Summers would suit me just fine!

person Oric13
schedule July 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ha! Delightfully depraved.

I wonder what other wicked ideas Willow has in mind for her sexy friends.