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by FrederickWertham

schedule May 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Here I am wondering what Dru's smiling about.

Also, you reminded me of a "Familiar of Zero" story. Can't remember the title for the life of me but Louise and Saito realize one day how fucked up their relationship is, what with her wipping him all the time. But instead of breaking it off or seeking help, they realize they're a sadist and masochist respectively and decide they're alright with that.

schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for a decent Hetero Buffy fic, that's not Necrophilia based. Make no mistake I liked A&S as characters but romantically was creepy to me. I am a big fan of Xan stories, so I was pretty happy to see this. Thank you and keep up the work please.

person Snailfap
schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story, psyched for the next chapter.

person Oric13
schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good start. Although I did notice a bit of a tone change during this chapter; Xander at the start of this chapter seems quite a bit more domineering than he is at the end of the chapter. Anyhow, curious to see where you're going with this.

person Rowin
schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

great start looking foward to seeing where you go from here.

schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was a good start. Wasn't expecting smut right off the bat. Very curious to read more. See where you'll go from here. I see a lot of pairings posted, but with so many characters with names that start with the same letters its hard to tell who is who.

Update soon. Good job.

 

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schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

See you're going for the hat trick with Slayers. Any chance of older women like Joyce or Jenny?