Still waiting for an update!
Need an update. Maybe throw Xander in as well?
): )
Well written, very sexy story. I hope Buffy becomes Willows slave in the waking world. Also, Willow could use magic to grow a real cock...
Another great chapter Rowename. After reading tle last chapter all that kept running thru my mind was the scenario of the "Scooby club meeting". Hopefully Willow's deliciously evil fantasy will manifest itself to life in future chapters. Imagine the looks on the face's of the scoobies if out of the blue Willow begins ripping Buffy's clothes off, exposing the blondes body and spanking her tight little ass in front of everyone. I'm sure Zander would enjoy seeing that for that matter even Anya she always struck me as being a little bi-curious. Giles would probably have to go put something stronger in his tea.
Chapter 9: Willow sure has a lot of fun turning her best friend into her anal-loving, submissive slut. ;)
This line seems out of character for Willow, though: As fun as the thought was of Buffy being helpless out there, Dawn would probably be much less fun to play with if her sister went missing.
Because as much as Willow enjoys fucking and humiliating Buffy, I feel that she's also still care deeply for her. So if I were you I'd probably change that into something like this: Though fast asleep and completely naked in her front yard, nothing much could happen to Buffy except for more humiliation... the extensive number of protective spells she'd casted to ward the Summers' property would protect the naked Slayer from any bodily harm.
Really loved chapter 5. Buffy getting ass fucked by another girl is always a win in my book.
Damn. DAMN!
Definitely becoming one of my very favourites.
For what its worth, my vote would be to keep concentrating on Dawn and Buffy - the psychology of what's going on is what makes your fic different.
I'm enjoying this story a lot.
Dawn looks to be properly bitch trained already, and I don't think it'll take Willow very long to have Buffy doing her sexual bidding as wel while awake.
Lotta fun. :p
Nice chapter. Love how it's becoming real for Dawnie now. Mmmmm...