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for Buffy's Lover

by LL72

person Oric13
schedule October 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 6: When Willow recommended that special place to Buffy, I kinda expected that she would be (magically?) spying on Buffy to find out who Buffy's mysterious lover is. Anyhow, curious to see how Willow & Tara are gonna fit into this.

person Oric13
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 5: Wow, Dawn was really slutting it up for her big sister in this chapter. And 5 hours of buttbanging by a horny Slayer? Dawnie has to have some superpowers as well to get through that. 8-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

person Dan
schedule August 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Reading this story I am picturing Buffy and Dawn getting into bdsm with Joyce (Buffy and Joyce domming Dawn, maybe Willow and Tara domming Dawn also) and eventuly Buffy finds out about the whole "me and Dawn need to have sex to save the world" thing and decides "I am happy with this Dawn is fine with it since she seduced me so I'll just go with it and not let her know I know so she can go on beliving she is selflessly saving the world" then Glory is beaten and everyone decides that Dawn is happy with the way things are since she belives she is helping to save the world and enjoy having her as a sex toy/slave so nobody tells her Glory is gone

person Oric13
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

<i>Chapter 4:</i> Loving this story a lot. Scenes like Joyce conversations with Dawn about being a good lil slut for Buffy, and Joyce's jealousy because she'd like to do all that nasty taboo sex with her youngest as well. And I like how Dawn is (naturally) kinda reluctant about letting Buffy fuck her tight ass.

Also like the detailed little non-sex scenes like how Buffy manages to get into those cemeteries at night.

And, of course, the scene where Buffy gets to fuck Dawnie's ass was very hot.

Looking forward already to the next chapter.

person Oric13
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Heh. I like where this is heading, and I like that you're willing to take your time and wait at least till chapter 4 before you have Buffy fucking Dawnie's tight teen ass. This a very hot & fun story. Keep up the good work.

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Very erotic and hot story.  I like how the relationship is developing.   Looking forward to the next chapter.

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The story is good but the inclusion of the Council and Giles and Travers after the occurances of season three's Helpless is ridiculous and absolutely disgusting... 

person Oric13
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Excellent 2nd chapter. I was kinda worried that this would be another story of "Buffy always secretly had the hots for Dawnie" and they would be fucking in the second paragraph already, but instead Dawn actually had to put some effort into seducing her sister.

Anyhow, the whole seduction was very entertaining and when the Summers sisters finally got it on is was very sexy. So, good job on this so far.

person Bree
schedule June 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise - I Hope Glory gets involved at some point. :)
person Oric13
schedule June 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious premise! And I liked this first chapter a lot. Dawn's lesbian slut training was quite an arousing read. Kinda surprised you didn't had Dawn practicing her lesbian lessons on Joyce. :P Looking forward to the next chapter.