Chapter #1 Review:
With this highly immoral instruction to her younger daughter; Mrs. Summers just ordered her daughters to, quite literally, to to Hell, as incest is frankly a doorway to Hell:
"You need to become Buffy's lover."
So, really, it seems as though Mrs. Joyce Summers has just sucommed to the tendency towards bad parenting that seems so epedemic to Sunnydale- maybe because it is built on a gate to Hell that such horrible behavior seems to perfectly normal as a parent quite literally telling her children to seduce oneanother- and it seems, based on their ages, basically to, quite literally, rape eachother due to age-of-consent laws. Good grief this's wrong behavior and instuction she's engaging in!
Chapter 13: Not where I pictured this story going after the first few chapters, but it was still lots of kinky fun.And it's nice to have a happy ending.
Thanks you for writing this.
Chapter 11: Possible the hottest chapter of the entire story. Especially enjoyed the kinky photo & film session. Joyce assisting her hot daughters' pornographic photoshoot was the twisted cherry on the depraved sundea.
I hope we can look forward to Joyce having to disipline both her daughters and making use of the new space. Buffy is the first to recive a paddling then she is given a front row seat as Joyce removes the buttplug and a set of large anal beads from Dawn (Saftey First) but is only able to adminster a few swats before Dawn cums hard squrting all over the furniture and passing out (that will be one week in chastity for her). Joyce then instructs Buffy to cleanup the 2 messes Dawn has made. The mess threatening to stain the realtivley new furniture and the mess underneath Joyce's Skirt
Chapter 10: Nothing like some good old-fashioned incestuous lesbian bdsm. Hot chapter, but would've liked to see some story progres/plot as well. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for writing and posting this story - it's an interesting take on a Buffy/Dawn pairing which I don't think I've seen done before. And that's saying something, as Buffy fiction has been in done in almost all conceivable ways.
It's the first story of your's I've read and I like the way you write - I'll make sure to check out more of your writing and then review it.
Thanks again for taking the time to write and post!
Chapter 8: Dawn being at least a somewhat reluctant particpant of the whole lesbian incest thing seemed more realistic and appealing than her suddenly jonesing for some hot mother/daughter lovin'. So I am kinda dissapointed at this latest development. Still it made for a pretty hot sex scene.
I look foward to joyce sitting in the middle of the couch with a daugter on each nipple.
"I look foward to joyce sitting in the middle of the couch with a daugter on each nipple."
and maybe "little faith" kissing mommies and rubbing her older sister's special places
Very hot lesbian threesome. And it's good to see some plot progression again at the end of this chapter.