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for Pleasures of the Flesh

by moridinhentai

person anon
schedule July 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Cool idea of using WoD/Vamp I don't think I've seen that as of yet at least in regards to BtVS. The two negative things I can say about the story is the length - too short! The other is the fleshcrafting, I think you could've spent more time (and sexytime) going into it. Perhaps the d/s theme was more what you were going for rather than freaky stuff? Either way I liked the story and I hope you write more, just a bit lengthier. Thanks!