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February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, But you have to fix alot of the dialogue's spacing, as its all crammed into each other. You also had several spelling errors, so this hurt a bit to try to read, and therefore I only glanced through the bottom half. Faith - Ken: related, its been tried before, but of the two other times I remember neither was finished. Hell, of those 2, one was on a GEO-cities site that folded Before the Implosion, so its been gone for 6 or 7 years now.
This has promise, but it needs tweaking very much. Good Luck.
This has promise, but it needs tweaking very much. Good Luck.