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for Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive

by DevilDuck

person saxman66
schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

 

Excellent.  Read the previous chapters when I 1st joined the site a couple of months ago and good to see an update. Very entertaining story and nicely ironic to see Dawn, the innocent younger daughter being so adult in both meanings of the word.

 

I wonder if Blue will be staying around and if so how much interaction he will have with the group. Going to be awkward explaining him to any visitors. ;)

person saxman66
schedule August 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Very entertaining, both the sex sessions and the way Xander struggles to handle a sex-craxed Dawn getting them both into more and more extreme encounters, even when she doesn't intend to.  This last chapter is very tender and makes a good counterpoint to the previous ones.

schedule June 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Need an update. Still don't know why Faith wasn't invited at least once. The double Xander on Dawn was fun, could have done a 5 Xander gangbang on her too though.

 

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schedule November 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

God I love this story. You come up with some great pairings. I particularly liked Kennedy/Xander and the demon with Faith/Dawn (though I was gutted you cut away from the good stuff with Dawn!). This story is so hot and you make the characters totally believable. I can't wait to see what happens next.

schedule August 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Just noticed there is in fact no Xander/Faith sex in this story. How is that possible? Lets have the happen soon? Or at least give Faith a strap on to use on Dawn. Ohh, a Xander/Dawn/Faith sandwich.

 

 

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schedule May 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

...Not sure how I feel about the rape scene of Faith.

 

 

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schedule September 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Not as fun as earlier chapters. Where are you going with this? Hope to read more soon, see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

 

 

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person Albino87
schedule May 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story

One of the few stories that have Dawn/Xander paring.

Wondering how long until Xander take command in the relationship and teach Dawn a lesson.


Keep the chapter coming
person LouiseFairfax73
schedule April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I seems to me that Buffy is just jealous that Dawn got to Xander before she did. I also think that Buffy is just acting out of spite that someone who isn't her is being happy with someone else.

Also, I can't wait for the Faith/Vi/Dawn/Xander grouping (then maybe just Dawn/Faith).

But that's just me.

Keep up the good work ;)
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would think Xander would get extremely mad at Buffy for continually accusing him of Parker level behavior and being a complete hypocrite considering she's slept with mass murderers that were centuries old. I'd love to see Xander, maybe Willow, completely lay into her for the way she's treating Xander