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by Prophecy

person Declan
schedule January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very dark...usually darker than I like my Buffy fics. But its also extremely well written and utterly compelling. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.

I already wanna give Faith a big hug. :(
person garfan
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm afraid I don't see how the main threat of the villains in chapter 2 works. Faith knows that Buffy died a second time and she knows there was never a third slayer activated by that. The idea that killing and reviving her would activate a Slayer each time shouldn't work. Faith should be able to figure that out without to much thought.

Also when they activated the Potentials to fight in Sunnydale they activated all the Potentials. So where is this army that's going to serve the Watcher's Council going to come from? There's no one to turn into a Slayer