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for Dawnie Grows Up

by razzaname

person Muramasa
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very nice job, nicely set atmosphere and well written for a PWP, just enough detail to stir the imagination without being so overly done that it becomes a slog. Nothing's really poor about this, a good solid job.
person LL72
schedule June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, one of the best by a new author I've read for a while. I really hope we see more from you.
person Oric13
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Exactly as advertised! A hot & fun PWP.