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June 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hiya. Naughty M/F Willow porn is always appreciated. You did a good job but there are some first/third person confusions. In case you haven't noticed yet.
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June 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
fantastic to see this story update here! This was a great chapter as well, so keep up the stellar work!
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May 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Your story is incredibly good, highly approve of it. Sorry about your incredibly bad streak of luck. Hope you find a new job soon.
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was good. A well-written lemon story - especially one with even a real plot! - is something I always enjoy.
I can't fond anything to complain about. Grammar and spelling are top as far as I can tell, so they don't distract from reading.
The actual sex scenes are great and with variety so it doesn't get boring.
And finally, the last bit with mayor hints at interesting things to come! (A spirit copy from before death? Backup clone?)
So, well done, keep up the good work!
I can't fond anything to complain about. Grammar and spelling are top as far as I can tell, so they don't distract from reading.
The actual sex scenes are great and with variety so it doesn't get boring.
And finally, the last bit with mayor hints at interesting things to come! (A spirit copy from before death? Backup clone?)
So, well done, keep up the good work!
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March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fun story! The game elements add a unique touch to the usual smutfic amusement. I hope that you manage to write some new chapters soon.
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January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This really deserves to be posted everywhere. There are even a couple of C2s on FF.Net that deal solely with the "Video Game Plot" of which this fits right in. If you've got more, that would be good too. Mostly I'd just like to read this withouthaving to put in my birthday every five minutes though. Couldn't you post it to the "Seraglio" archive, where a few of your other stories already are?
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August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Seems a bit to Short of a chapter for my taste. IMHO It would have been better if you had completed the whole chapter
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July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This seems like an interesting story. I do hope Xander and Willow end up together though.
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Super fun story and idea!
Really looking forward to where this goes - hope you continue it!
Really looking forward to where this goes - hope you continue it!