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for Wishing Changes Everything

by Declan

person breachoftruscott
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Single*Funniest*Line*Ever; "Evil Seventies Circus Hell" I literally couldn't say or read that sentence without laughing uncontrollably... my eyes are still watering, and I'm still chuckling at it... Oh, and by the way, brilliant story overall! Legitimately! More! Please! (Unless it has already been concluded, haven't finished reading it all yet, couldn't make it past that line without laughing uncontrollably, as I mentioned above)
person --
schedule May 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!

Really well written, and a nice progression and characterization