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OMG this is an amazing story, and it melted my heart and I wish there was a part 2!!! It's one of the best Fuffy stories I've ever reas, if not THE best...

You did not just do that... You made a long, intricate story, with character development of all involved, a romance that read like so fluidly that I almost forgot that I was reading dirty stories online, and then just reset the whole thing with massive heartbreak. That is just Evil with a capital E. What is going to happen next? Does the djinn just call it quits? How does the story change from here? I kind of need to know now... Will there be a sequel? Please.
Buffy's love life never catches any kind of break, huh?

Gosh I really needed this. I've been reading through it for the past couple of days, and it's just so dang satisfying. I've been needing a fix of Buffy X Faith and you've done that spectacularly. I've never had a fanfiction just perfectly scratch an itch.

It's fun, and sweet, and the progression is delicious. The beginning was a little stiff as Buffy kept to the script too closely, but as I've continued the story really found it's own stride and it's be so wonderfully satisfying.

I don't write reviews often, but I just had to review this to let you know how much I really do appreciate you putting down this story. I'm not finished with it just yet, but you can be sure that when I do finish it, I'll write another review full of keening anguish and suffering. If your an author anything like me, then that'll probably be very satisfying for you!

Wow.
Very intense - wasn't expecting the realities to revert like that.
Looking forward to what comes - thanks for writing!!

it's an entertaining story so far, and I like the slow build makes it a lot more worthwhile.
There's just one annoying error that keeps popping up, the author mixes up:
their - they're
I noticed at least three instances in this chapter alone, and it has happened all through the story.

I should probably add there - their noticed it twice in this chapter.
All in all, every time you use any variation of there, their or they're, you should ask yourself which one you actually mean so you don't keep making the same mistakes.

Cheers

I feel like sometimes canon is being rehashed a tad too much, even with her future knowledge, Buffy is being awfully reactive, considering how much of a bastard Travers is I wonder why she didn't even consider it happening to Faith, it was a pretty obvious loophole. And what was up with Buffy's weakness, did she drink from the same water bottle or something? That felt a bit unclear.
I really don't know why she didn't hit Travers, it's the second time she has experienced how inhumane the watchers can be, and she seems awfully forgiving of Giles, this is probably his lowest point in the whole series, and shouldn't be easily accepted.
Not to mention Buffy kinda making a habit of impotently letting the bad guys go, first Tricks, then Spike, and now Travers

And the then Faith smile - And then Faith smiled
stake's - a stake's

Awesome story, and continues to be extremely well-written.
Really enjoy this,
Thanks for writing!

Very well written, great progression and characterization.

Overall, awesome!
Thanks for writing!

Fantastic story, truly enjoyed it and I sincerely look forward to updates and any other works you may produce in the future. Also be sure to upload it to other websites - AFF seems to have a somewhat limited audience these days.