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I'd just love a sequel to concentrate on Dawn getting Buffy (and may be Willow) into Porn. You just know that she would have a convert's zeal and be really keen for others to join her. That would be GREAT.

Glad you all enjoyed it.

I have some vague plans to do a follow up, but we'll see how it goes

Masion De Sade: Training the new girl
Staring
Jay as Mummy
Siobhan Gellar as Duchess
Dawnie Springs as Princess

Charisma Carpenter as The Lady's Maid
Caroline Farrell as The House Maid
Galinda Hannigan as The Nursery maid
Locasta Benson as The Kitchen Maid

and introducing
Amy Wicked as The New Between Maid

Great ending to the story. The action & menace were well-done. Spoilers ahead:

Amy's change of heart was a nice touch as was Dawn being the rescuer of Buffy. But what happened to Amy & Tara & Willow? And Faith after she got her soul back.

The prurient part of me was waiting to see the Summers women get together. Maybe a sequel with Buffy as a lesbian porn star?

I do love a happy ending.
Good job, LL. This was a very enjoyable tale.

Chapter 10: Xander's such a lucky bastard! Getting to fuck Buffy's hot lil Sis in all three holes.
Another excellent chapter.

I'm all caught up now & I'm really enjoying this story. In terms of sex, the lat chapter, with Buffy and Cordy, was the hottest. And, even though I'm not a fan of toys in lesbian scenes, it works in this one. Same for the straight (relatively) sex scenes.

Like Oric13, I'm finding the non-sex story fascinating. This story would be great even if there was no sex. It's well-written (an occasional typo but who among us writers doesn't have typos, etc?), definitely well-plotted and I'm looking forward to where this will go and how Evil Amy fares in her war with Willow & the gang.

Chapter 9: This is turning out to be quite a thrilling tale. I'm curious to see what's gonna happen next.

Chapter 8: Good chapter! Liked the Buffy/Cordelia scenes and the plot development. I especially liked you explaining how they're able to bring some dead back to life and that they're only able to do so with people connected to the Hellmouth/Slayer.

Having enjoyed Big City Sin and the porn industry aspect of it, I loved that there was going to be a sequel. And I personally loved the scene in chapter four with the two OC porn studs banging Dawn and Joyce. In fact overall, I like the scenes that have involved the girls "on set" or at work. So I'd generally like to see more of that, and less risk of drifting away into old habits of the same girl-girl pairings and sex acts we can see in numerous other stories from you. I'd love to see if Dawn, Cordy and Joyce can recruit Buffy, Willow and other girls into the gangbang, bukkake and all the other filth they can get involved in doing porn movies.