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August 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Still an excellent story that I hope you will continue.
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December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Plz update this story on here or fanfiction.net
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A fine story. I like your portrayal of Faith as well as the pacing in this last chapter. I'm slightly confused though since in the first chapter Buffy apparently is still (somewhat) rebellious and in the third she has submitted. How much time has passed? Or have I misunderstood something? I also would have liked/would like to read all the stuff you hinted at happening to Buffy.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: You clearly put a lot of effort into this chapter and it shows 'cause it's the best chapter yet.
Seriously, it's like your writing skills suddenly increased by almost 50%.
Showing and telling about Buffy's new role in life as Faith's submissive bitch resulted in some very hot scenes. Also enjoyed the little Joyce/Buffy teases you put in. The sex stuff, Faith recalling the Buffy bitch training she did, the gradual furthering of the plot... all very well done.
Best of all: due to the more gradual build-up and not getting too carried away, instead of being an eye-rolling annoyance, the anal scenes were an actual highlight this time!
And you did an especially good job on getting Faith's voice and personality right in this one.
I'm really loving the way this story is going and are eagerly awaiting more. But please don't rush it because I'd like to see more quality chapters like this.
Seriously, it's like your writing skills suddenly increased by almost 50%.
Showing and telling about Buffy's new role in life as Faith's submissive bitch resulted in some very hot scenes. Also enjoyed the little Joyce/Buffy teases you put in. The sex stuff, Faith recalling the Buffy bitch training she did, the gradual furthering of the plot... all very well done.
Best of all: due to the more gradual build-up and not getting too carried away, instead of being an eye-rolling annoyance, the anal scenes were an actual highlight this time!
And you did an especially good job on getting Faith's voice and personality right in this one.
I'm really loving the way this story is going and are eagerly awaiting more. But please don't rush it because I'd like to see more quality chapters like this.
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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Good chapter! I like the wicked way Faith handles things.
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September 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, interesting setup. So many possibilities where you could take this story. You even not so subtly hinted at it - Faith and her little harem of obedient sluts. With the powers her sluts possess, she could then easily overthrow the mayor...
I look forward to reading more of this!
I look forward to reading more of this!
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
your storys always feel kinda similiar but they are still hot...and rough f/f in the buffyverse is always a good read
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very hot crossover between the two shows. I'm already looking forward to the next chapters with Phoebe & Piper. Will Billie be making an appearance too?
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July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hot...Hot...HOT!!!!!!!!
perfect from start to finish, I love a total dominate and dark Faith. Can't wait to see her wreck and break in the other 2 charmed sisters and is their any chance we could get a scene of her spending some......ahem "quality time" with her main pet Buffy?
perfect from start to finish, I love a total dominate and dark Faith. Can't wait to see her wreck and break in the other 2 charmed sisters and is their any chance we could get a scene of her spending some......ahem "quality time" with her main pet Buffy?