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for Buffy's Bad Bet

by Oric13

person Krulos
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter: 1.).
Well this is an interesting take: Faith is now Buffy and Dawnie's adopted sister! And here's where this story gets truly perverse: since Buffy and Faith now call the same woman "Mom"- thereby being sisters, what's happening when Faith is groping Buffy is a form of incestous rape- rape because there's no way Buffy would consent to being touched by Faith at this time in her life, incest because they call the same woman "mom"- thereby being sisters- Sick action, though I am interested in how this would/will turn out.
I liked the part about Willow being as bias as a turkey doing a report on Thanksgiving (Buffy's perspective).
Fun idea, Sir! I do wonder if there will be a sequel to this story.
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Krulos, a fan of fanfiction.
person MTL
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Given my personal preferences I'd love to see you write a detailed account of Willow butt fucking Buffy and Faith as the beginning of chapter 4 suggests. In the meantime I'd love to see more of Buffy being spanked/humiliated given, as proven by the last couple of chapters of this story, no one does BDSM fan fiction better than you.
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this story is hiarious
person tracker
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice, didnt think we would see another update to your storys.

As always good update and would love to see more
person breachoftruscott
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yayy!!! finally a new chapter!! Thanks! Yummy! back story & new debauched hawtness too! Awesome! So what does Willow have in store for Buffy? And for Faith, for that matter? Is Will gonna end up with 2 pet slayers? Who knows? (other than you, of course ;) Please do not keep us waiting as long for the next chapters of this devilishly depraved & delicious story! I am as eager for more as Dawn is to spank her older sis's hiney! And love the idea of a Summers' Punishment Strap! LOL
person irpk
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I'd like to see Janice getting to give buffy instructions as well. Perhaps the next chapter?
person mindy luce
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Me likes! Of course, I've really enjoyed every Buffy-story you've written, so that comes as no surprise.

I like the harmonious undertone of this story: The three girls living together as family is nice for a change. I'm not sure I'm feeling the whole "topless on couch with mom" concept, but that's ok. I sure goes a long way towards establishing a very sexually liberated tone for the Summers household.

I look forward to reading the next chapter - so please update!

person wip
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes, new story from Oric, thank you
person pettrum
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Can't wait to see where it goes.