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November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story. The psychology of the Summers sisters is incredible, with Dawn being horrible, selfish, and knowing exactly what buttons to press as she becomes more confident in her own power while Buffy tries - and fails - to hold onto her sense of self. This is very true to the later seasons of the show in terms of tone and dialogue while still being perverse in the best possible ways.
I can hardly wait to see what you've got in mind for the chapters to come.
I can hardly wait to see what you've got in mind for the chapters to come.
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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, are you going to be finishing it at some point?
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good story, please continue
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Good chapter. Finally something else than extreme butt-fucking.
Dawnie getting off on sexually humiliating her bossy big sis was a lot of fun to read.
Dawnie getting off on sexually humiliating her bossy big sis was a lot of fun to read.
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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hot damn! the Dawn-imatrix strikes again!!! who, oh who will poor Buffy run into while patrolling? Faith? Spike? Angel? Willow? (one never knows...;)) Drusilla, maybe? deeeee-lish! more more MORE!!!!
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March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Part 2: Enjoyed this 2nd part, although not quite as much as I initially thought I would, especially considering I'd really been looking forward to more of this kinky tale.
So I spend some time wondering what the problem was, and decided that I was probably looking forward to more Dawn/Buffy kinkiness.
Still, a Dawn/Faith pairing is also very hot, and sweet lil Dawnie fist-fucking the dark slayer's tight ass was pretty fucking hot and not something you read every day.
So why is my grade for the part a B- instead of a straight A, which I felt the first part deserved.
Digging a little deeper, I think the problem is that you wasted very little time in turning Faith into an ultra submissive anal slut who'll even happily fist her own ass; story-wise there's really not many places you can take the Dawn/Faith pairing after that.
I mean, sure, there'll undoubtedly be several other oversized toys that Dawnie will shove up her bitch's bunghole, and the setting might even more public than the kitchen of the Summers' house, but it'll still seem a bit repetitive after all this anal play that already took place between them. Faith has obviously already fully surrendered to her young Mistress, so the tension there is pretty much gone.
So I'm kinda hoping that when Dawnie eventually fucks her big sister's butt, it'll have taken her a lot more time & effort than Faith.
The harder the fight the sweeter the victory...
Oh, and two more things.
One: it's bare ass, not bear ass. At least I didn't think you wanted to write that Faith has the ass of a bear ;)
Two: "Harder! Fist that slutty ass of yours as hard as you can bitch! Tear your own fucking ass hole apart! - considering the "EVERYTHING Dawn says must be obeyed" spell she's under, and Faith's super slayer strength, Dawn probably should have rephrased that slightly.
Finally, please don't let these minor criticism disparage you, because that's definitely not how they're intended.
I DID enjoy this part--it was a very enjoyable read--and I'm looking forward to more.
So I spend some time wondering what the problem was, and decided that I was probably looking forward to more Dawn/Buffy kinkiness.
Still, a Dawn/Faith pairing is also very hot, and sweet lil Dawnie fist-fucking the dark slayer's tight ass was pretty fucking hot and not something you read every day.
So why is my grade for the part a B- instead of a straight A, which I felt the first part deserved.
Digging a little deeper, I think the problem is that you wasted very little time in turning Faith into an ultra submissive anal slut who'll even happily fist her own ass; story-wise there's really not many places you can take the Dawn/Faith pairing after that.
I mean, sure, there'll undoubtedly be several other oversized toys that Dawnie will shove up her bitch's bunghole, and the setting might even more public than the kitchen of the Summers' house, but it'll still seem a bit repetitive after all this anal play that already took place between them. Faith has obviously already fully surrendered to her young Mistress, so the tension there is pretty much gone.
So I'm kinda hoping that when Dawnie eventually fucks her big sister's butt, it'll have taken her a lot more time & effort than Faith.
The harder the fight the sweeter the victory...
Oh, and two more things.
One: it's bare ass, not bear ass. At least I didn't think you wanted to write that Faith has the ass of a bear ;)
Two: "Harder! Fist that slutty ass of yours as hard as you can bitch! Tear your own fucking ass hole apart! - considering the "EVERYTHING Dawn says must be obeyed" spell she's under, and Faith's super slayer strength, Dawn probably should have rephrased that slightly.
Finally, please don't let these minor criticism disparage you, because that's definitely not how they're intended.
I DID enjoy this part--it was a very enjoyable read--and I'm looking forward to more.
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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good story you've got going so far. Trying to be patientent waiting for the next chapter. Also, are you still writing "Buffy's Blackmailing Little Sister". Hope to be reading new chapters from both stories soon (real soon). Thank's for taking the time to write for us readers.
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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so hot...so many delicious possibilities...yummy yummy yum more PLEASE!!!!
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. More soon I hope.
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January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Looking forward to Dawn training both slayers. It would be fun to watch them compete in humiliating challenges for the honor of having Dawn fuck their asses.