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I have really enjoyed your story up to the point it is now and continue checking back to see if any more chapters have been added. I know that real life tends to get in the way and I do hope that all is well with not only you but your family too, if there is one. The reason I say this is because it has been quite a while since your last update, which was on 8-25-2012. Being that your story is designated as a WIP (work in progress), I am wondering, as I am sure many others are also, when myself and others will see the continuation of No Tomorrow, No Regrets. It is one of the many adult fiction stories I enjoy reading on line and I have patiently waited to see more of the story from you but to no avail. I know I can't speak for everyone who has been able to read No Tomorrow, No Regrets but I personally have no doubt that other readers of this story would like to see more of the story and its eventual conclusion. Please get your muse back and continue to update No Tomorrow, No Regrets until its final conclusion. Thank you.

Great story so far. The characters are fairly believable and the action is hot. Faith and Xander is one of my favorite pairings. I hope you eventually finish this.

Just finished reading the second chapter some days ago and have been checking back to see if you have submitted any updates. I liked the conversation between Buffy and Xander regarding what they are going to do with Faith and the possible consequences resulting from this threeway if they were to survive the latest catastrophe that makes up Buffy's life. Then your description of what went on in the bedroom was captivating to say the least. I don't mean to be impatient, but I am really looking forward to the following chapter(s) and hope that you will be updating this story soon.

I liked the way you started the story. What makes your story interesting is the premise of a possible three way between Faith, Buffy, and Xander. Their immediate future is unknown and Faith being who she is, what better way to celebrate life than to act on your instincts. I liked how you led up to the point in the story that had both Buffy and Faith bring up the idea to Xander. While all three have had their differences, Xander and Buffy have always been the others friend, through good times and bad. At the same time, Faith has had her moments with the both of them. I have read many of the adult fiction regarding Buffy and the others in her world and I thought the hook of your story is a good one. If the first part of your story is any indication, I hope it will not very long before we see more chapters and/or the finish of the story. Look forward to reading the rest of it in the very near future.

I'd be lying through iron-clenched teeth and with pants doused in burning napalm if I said that I've never enjoyed a story about a FFM threesome wherein the two girls are suddenly really okay with bisexuality regardless of their actual preferences in cannon, and I can also appreciate how hard it sometimes is to find a hook that will get a story started with at least some small modicum of context for the hot shmexings. Having said all that, the premise for this story --Faith suddenly wanting to try batting for both teams at the same time for shits and giggles-- seems abrupt and forced, especially in the context of your earlier stories.

I've read very compelling and arousing stories where Faith was gay for Buffy, or where she was straight and hot for Xander, or playfully bi for both. The difference between those stories and this one is largely one of consistency: For the entirety of each of the other stories, Faith's sexual preference either remains the same for the entirety of the story (even a short one), or it evolves over time in such a way that the reader can appreciate the hard-fought discoveries about herself that she makes. In either case, Faith either already has or --through adversity and deliberation-- earns her desire for a specified gender as an integral part of her character.

In this story, the "oh what the hell" aspect of her decision to snorg Buffy is completely out of left field, feeling more like a decision to try a slightly different flavor of potato chip rather than disregarding all of her nominally hetero desires that she is supposed to have revelled in her entire life (according to the stated context for this story: Cannon BtVS up to and including S7). Further, in all of your previous stories featuring Faith, she is featured in a relationship with Xander, *very* satisfied with het sex, and with no real personal interest in girl-on-girl action beyond teasing Willow or as a means of titilating Xander. (It's one thing to go for the lesbo-frenching because its "HAWT", and quite another to kiss a girl because you have a burning desire for her and want to connect with her on a very intimate level.)

Your Faith / Xander stories are intelligent, believable and erotic, consistently so, which is why this story seems to disappoint more in its lack of realism. (Realism? In *MY* porn fantasy? It's more likely than you think.)

I wish I could offer a more constructive criticsm than "it's jarring and needs improvement", but this scene really feels like it's a fantasy that Xander would have rather than Faith.

good start, need more chapters, you could have the fun sex part, but you can also have some real talks.

love it please update soon

Interesting story, well written... perhaps a little more lead in, as the first kiss seems to happen very quickly. But that's a minor quibble and may be my own preferences talking