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for Fifi

by CindyShrapnel

person MarshallOC9
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you're done with this one or not. I know you said it was gonna be only a few chapters which i think is kinda sad cause there is so much you could do with this. But in any case great work. I found this late last night and couldn't put it down. If you are done with this one(hope not) then please keep writing adult buffy stories, you definitely know how to do it right.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

just finished reading chapter 4 of your terrific story - and I've enjoyed every one before it! Fantastic setup, great idea, love how you slightly tweak the characters. It seems you're not a big fan of Giles, though... :-)

I hope you'll post the next update/chapter soon - I can hardly wait to finding out what will happen next!

Well done!
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
still good work
I can?t wait too know what Cordi do with Buffy.
person Oric13
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, seems like a really big coincidence that Buffy ALSO happens to a strong submissive at heart who gets off being treated as a naughty puppy, and who has a dominant soulmate right in her circle of friends.
But whatever... the D/s humiliation scenes are still pretty damn hot.
person Oric13
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another fun read.
I'm curious to find out what's next in store for Buffy.
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love stories with voluntary submission, or mind control where you just flip a switch and the person is changed. I can't stand stories where someone is broken down though. So while Fifi is awesome I'd be happier without Buttercup
person Oric13
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the 2nd chapter, especially the bit about Buffy's taming, although I kinda figured she'd be a lot more furious.
Love Buffy's new outfit, and I bet the Scoobies will as well ;)
person Oric13
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Fun story.
Hope you'll continue it 'cause I'm definitely interested in seeing what happens next.
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
realy good work.
I can?t wait to read the next part.
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great start i would love to see more