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for To Arms!

by tattletail

person DJ Cook
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great start! It's a nice teaser start but now I really want more! The fight scene was easy to follow and shows agood bit of thought. Keep it up! Really, got any more to this tale?
person Soap
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start - this 'fic has a lot of promise.

Looking forward to Chapter 4... :D
person josh isidori
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
from what i've read so far this fic is absolutely awesome. i look forward to your next update.
person GhostwriterMO
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was HOT!!! Hyena Xander in Outworld with Sheeva; my mind is aroused, blown away, and also very hungry as well. Please more with Xander getting a few more subs; Mileena, Nitara, Khameleon, Frost, and maybe even Sindel if Xander "deals" with the Emperor. So since you made one mean cliffhanger, please update cause I love Xander (non yaoi as Angel or Spike's boytoy) going wild. Keep up the great work!!!
person 77dragon
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work.