rate_review Reviews

Oh that *can't* be the end! This story is wonderful... What happens next? What if the king is ailing? What can he impart to his dear son before that happens? How can he better prepare him for the role? And what of his people?

*Please* do a sequel at some point - you have an avid fan of your writing.

Thank you for sharing.

L
J

Well, it's an interesting premise, but you do have a few things that spellcheck passed as okay (spelled correctly, but not the right words), so you might want to have a look at that.

For example-
"Can I hold you hand?

Instead of -
Can I hold your hand?

Thought you should know.