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Chapter 1:
Well, Dawn just enslaved, raped, and blackmailed Faith in the end into sleeping with her, threatening her all the while!
At the end of the chapter she practically tells Faith "sleep with me.", she also practically stipped her too!
The concept of Dawn as Faith's mistress is an interesting one- extremely interesting, that is!
Man those women are messed up!
Entertaining story, though. Dawn seems to have wanted a sex-slave, and made Faith fit the bill.
Signed:
Krulos.

Chapter 2, and finishing review of chapter 1.:
Well, it seems these women are psychotic! Faith happy to be abused, Dawnie; the sadistic mistess, et cetera... this is WEIRD!
In the previous chapter, it seems that Dawn is going to say "I said Kisses, B*tch!" (as in 'give me kisses')
Now it seems as though Dawn invites Kit to abuse Faith on a date in the lavatories- What an idea!- a date in the lavatories!, pretty much saying "if you come to the club with me, you can play with her body, with or without her permission." Dawn also takes Faith on a break-in to someone else's house to 'play house' with her, so, this is, as I said, WEIRD!
Creative idea: Dawn being Faith's mistress!
Signed:
Krulos.

please updateeeeeeeeeee

Realy good fic.
I want more.

Hottest make over ever!!!!! and it's not even over yet!!! Please say the next update is very soon cuz i can't wait to see what else dawn has in store. as for who discovers them i'm not a real fan of either buffy or willow cuz they both get on my nerves!!! so I don't knoow if this is allowed but i think giles would be a interesting choice.

Although I partly agree with Oric13's critique above I thoroughly enjoyed reading chapter 5 (Meeting The Master) and chapter 6 (Makeover - Part 1). The sex scene between Dawn and Faith was incredibly hot and I very much liked Dawn's creative use of magic. Even then I was totally blown away by the 'Makeover' chapter. Awesome! Especially the tattoos were genius thinking, truly inspiring.

I don't know whether I'm liking the story. On the one hand, H.O.T. but Dawn is seeming seriously cold to Faith. I had hoped that Dawn would be a dom, but a nice dom. It would be nice to see more Soft Dawn, Tender Dawn. In terms of someone from the Dale, it can't be a dude so that removes Spike, Xander, Giles, Wood, Angel, etc. It can't be Buffy or Willow because I hate Will and Buffy would try to kill Buffy before she thought of blackmail sex. Tara's dead so no. Maybe Amy? A gal with no strong loyalty to Buffy who likes to have fun... yeah that could work. Or maybe Kennedy? Things don't work out with Willow so she goes to visit her sister slayer and likes what she sees. Ooh! Ooh! A three-way romance! Amy or Kennedy would be hot. Ooh! Four-way romance! HOTTER!

Great chapter I can't wait for more please update very soon!roleplaying wise I think it would be fun to see
catholic school girl faith would be awesome. or faith never had a good relationship with her parents so dawn filling that role would be kinky.

Ok so I didn't think I'd like this pairing but am suprised at how great this story is and how much I'm enjoying this pairing. I was wondering if you've thought of doing another story with this pairing but with Dawn as the sub and Faith as the dom. After how bratty Dawn was with all the stealing and stuff maybe Faith would be the firm hand she needs. But anyway great job so far on this fic and can't wait for your next update:)

wow great fic. can't wait for more, do you plan for any role playing in future chapters? please update soon.