rate_review Reviews

great story cant wait for the next chapter

Definitely better than the 2nd chapter.
Aside from the smut I'm also enjoying the plot.
I especially liked how Faith arranged for Nikita to attack Willow so she would waste her one spell a day - very clever!
Although it didn't quite turn out like she'd hoped ;)
Also very much enjoyed the scene of Willow dominating Faith - very well written. Loved her hesitation before ordering Faith to go down on her (very much in-character for Willow) and the spanking she delivered afterwards.
It was actually a relief to read about some other kinda sex than ass-fucking for a change :)

Good job, guys.

love it please update soon

OK, I get that you REALLY like anal, LL, but, seriously dude, this is a bit much (especially the entire Claire Bennet scene - Holy Shit!).
If this is the way you wanna go then you may as well put in the warning: "For Anal fetishists only" at the beginning of the story, because you're gonna turn off any other readers.
Don't get me wrong, anal sex is often a turn on for me as well, but making it the focus of the entire freaking story is definitely overdoing it (at least IMHO).

love it please update soon

I am so starved for submissive!Faith that I don't care fig about the plot. Yum! I hope to see the new chapter soon!

love it please update soon

A lot of this story doesn't make sense, the actual set-up, but when you end up with a great Willow\Faith scene like that, who cares about the rest!

Hope to see more training and Faith being shared around.

I really like this story. It is so hot. Please continue it.

Nicely written, but I'd rather see Willow as a sub.