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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaargh! Two months without an update! How much longer before we find out how Buffy and friends break out of prison and give Lilah and Amy a steady ass reaming of their own medicine? Enquiring minds want to know!
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: I was surprised at first to be reading about Lilah & Amy instead of Buffy/Dawn & Willow/Faith, but it was a good writers choice of you to do so 'cause the story definitely needed a chapter like this to give the storyline some progress. It was also fun to read about the current state of Sunnydale (or Amydale ;) as a lesbian BDSM butt-fucking paradise.
And just like the previous chapters, this was had plenty of hot scenes. The one with the hot Hellcat girls was especially nice. I also enjoyed Glory's public submission to Amy.
Another fine job, keep up the good work guys.
And just like the previous chapters, this was had plenty of hot scenes. The one with the hot Hellcat girls was especially nice. I also enjoyed Glory's public submission to Amy.
Another fine job, keep up the good work guys.
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it please update soon
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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for next chapter
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I agree with IMTCWAY about keeping Buffy & Dawn's close sister relationship intact.
I can see that in public Buffy would need to treat Dawn as her bitch, but there's no good reason why she couldn't be sweet to Dawn in private (while fucking her cute kid sister's fuckholes :).
A bit of sisterly tenderness between those two when they're alone or with Willow & Faith would make the kinky sex they're having even better IMO.
I can see that in public Buffy would need to treat Dawn as her bitch, but there's no good reason why she couldn't be sweet to Dawn in private (while fucking her cute kid sister's fuckholes :).
A bit of sisterly tenderness between those two when they're alone or with Willow & Faith would make the kinky sex they're having even better IMO.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it please update soon
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I especially liked the part where Buffy made Dawnie display her thoroughly fucked, gaping asshole in the mess hall and Willow playing kinky mind games with Faith.
Willow and Buffy are turning out to be a couple of very talented tops :)
Willow and Buffy are turning out to be a couple of very talented tops :)
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. First it seems that you may be developing something of a plot to it given what you have shown of Lilah and how the Buffy and Dawn situation is going; most of that however still waits to be seen.
Now, you are obviously showing a kind of mind control magic in place inside the prison as demonstrated by how Buffy is having lesbian feelings and increased sex drive. Tied to that are low key physical changes in the form of increased sensitivity of the prisoners' anuses and the presents of a dedicated anal g-spot, like granting the female inmates an equivalent to the prostate while leaving regular erogenous zones in place. All of which by itself would have quite an effect. However there is something else that to me appears to be happening but has not been explicitly stated. That is the way the act of anal sex is affecting the minds of the participants with regard to their status as a Submissive or Dominant, Top or Bottom.
It looks to me like you have the act of taking someone in the ass is causing, not instantly but at a progressive rate, the person doing so to have their feelings of dominance and power to be amplified so that even if not normal sexually aggressive and willing to use others they become so, as an example Buffy. At the same time it causes the act of receiving anal sex to be absolutely revolting to them such that they would never want to try it, perhaps even desensitizing a tops anal G-spot so that they don't become stimulated through other sex acts.
On the flip side, you have the act of being taken in the ass by someone, though it looks like at a much faster rate and with more intensity, seems to be causing the person being butt-fucked to have feelings of submissiveness. Even in a person who is normally a strong and sexually dominant individual, Faith for example, to enjoy it and become willingly submissive. In reverse of how Tops are made to perceive it, for subs the act of receiving anal sex becomes the most enjoyably form of sex they can have and makes them see offering up there ass as the most perfect way of demonstrating their submission.
My question is am I right in reading Gehanna/Amy's magic as having such an effect, or am I reading more into the behavior of the characters than is actually present?
With that out of the way I had a couple of ideas. First you have said that a incantation is needed to open the portal for someone to leave. So I was thinking, what if after someone has been processed as a prisoner the portal is tied do the status of the one reading the incantation/passing through the portal so that only whose mind is completely submissive can traverse it? As such no prisoner with a dominant personality and thus still a threat to Amy could leave, only submissive.
The other idea I had was what if Buffy, Willow, and Dawn escape and defeat Amy, restoring reality to the way it should be, and in the process Willow were to become the master of the Gehanna prison in Amy's place. Since this looks like it is set in an early Season 7 time frame it might be fun to have it so that The First Evil and its minions have no power in Gehanna's realm and so Buffy and Willow decide to use the prison as a safe haven and training ground for all of the Potential Slayers. I think a lot of fun could be had with that.
I am Still looking forward to seeing what happens now that Dawn is Buffy's bitch. For example how is Lilah going to react.
Now, you are obviously showing a kind of mind control magic in place inside the prison as demonstrated by how Buffy is having lesbian feelings and increased sex drive. Tied to that are low key physical changes in the form of increased sensitivity of the prisoners' anuses and the presents of a dedicated anal g-spot, like granting the female inmates an equivalent to the prostate while leaving regular erogenous zones in place. All of which by itself would have quite an effect. However there is something else that to me appears to be happening but has not been explicitly stated. That is the way the act of anal sex is affecting the minds of the participants with regard to their status as a Submissive or Dominant, Top or Bottom.
It looks to me like you have the act of taking someone in the ass is causing, not instantly but at a progressive rate, the person doing so to have their feelings of dominance and power to be amplified so that even if not normal sexually aggressive and willing to use others they become so, as an example Buffy. At the same time it causes the act of receiving anal sex to be absolutely revolting to them such that they would never want to try it, perhaps even desensitizing a tops anal G-spot so that they don't become stimulated through other sex acts.
On the flip side, you have the act of being taken in the ass by someone, though it looks like at a much faster rate and with more intensity, seems to be causing the person being butt-fucked to have feelings of submissiveness. Even in a person who is normally a strong and sexually dominant individual, Faith for example, to enjoy it and become willingly submissive. In reverse of how Tops are made to perceive it, for subs the act of receiving anal sex becomes the most enjoyably form of sex they can have and makes them see offering up there ass as the most perfect way of demonstrating their submission.
My question is am I right in reading Gehanna/Amy's magic as having such an effect, or am I reading more into the behavior of the characters than is actually present?
With that out of the way I had a couple of ideas. First you have said that a incantation is needed to open the portal for someone to leave. So I was thinking, what if after someone has been processed as a prisoner the portal is tied do the status of the one reading the incantation/passing through the portal so that only whose mind is completely submissive can traverse it? As such no prisoner with a dominant personality and thus still a threat to Amy could leave, only submissive.
The other idea I had was what if Buffy, Willow, and Dawn escape and defeat Amy, restoring reality to the way it should be, and in the process Willow were to become the master of the Gehanna prison in Amy's place. Since this looks like it is set in an early Season 7 time frame it might be fun to have it so that The First Evil and its minions have no power in Gehanna's realm and so Buffy and Willow decide to use the prison as a safe haven and training ground for all of the Potential Slayers. I think a lot of fun could be had with that.
I am Still looking forward to seeing what happens now that Dawn is Buffy's bitch. For example how is Lilah going to react.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but I'm disappointed that Buffy is not going to treat Dawnie as her sister any more, even in private. I think the relationship between them is too important to lose.