Watching Willow fuck Cordelia was really cool.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time and it keeps getting better. Buffy buttfucked by her mother? Didn't see that coming, I expected it the other way around. A confontatation seems to be brewing. Nice. Or maybe Buffy was faking? Open to conjecture, excellent. I encourage you to keep writing. You do it well. You might check the difference between comlementary and complimentary though.
Chapter 28 Review.
For all we know; Amy might've married Joyce, and thus wound up Buffy and Dawn's stepmom; and knowing how completely cuckoo the characters are in this, due to the evil atmosphere of the town, it'd not surprise me one bit if indeed that's what'll turn out to be the case in the next chapter or chapters!
This is a first class story. It has narrative drive, it has character development and it has hot girl-on-girl sex. What more could anyone want. Thank you for your efforts. I enjoyed the story very much. I'd give it an A rating.
Good chapter, I'm glad you wrote that story again.
An excellent chapter. I look forward to more.