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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! oo u r evil
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'd say that pretty much wraps up those last two chapters. [cheers] well done. now, you gonna send me in the direction of more previous chapters, or are ya gonna feed my fic beast and gimme the new ones?
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh shite!!! [looks contrite] i... should prolly check out the last few chapters... hadn't i? cause... real life burst in through the door and scared the crap outta me but... i promise, i'll get right on it, ok?
[runs off to do just that]
[runs off to do just that]
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As far as I can tell the end of chapter 2 is missing and the mistakes get more frequent from there. I realise the mistakes are not your fault but thanks to Glitchs (hehe) in AFF. As for other sites, there is always your own site. I also enjoy mysticmuse.net.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a while back and would love to keep reading it. The only problem is it's been mangled. Chunks are missing, occasional words are repeated or missing. Basically it's impossible to read. I enjoyed it last time and want to keep reading it. However I can't. You apparently only allow it on AFF, could you please fix the issues so I can keep reading.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don't know but thats ok because thats y i like the story so much cause its full of surprises and i'm glad you update and i am also hoping you will update soon on not like other girls...thanks and keep up the good work
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definatly enjoyable. damn good, original idea, which at the moment seems to be slightly lacking within the buffy'verse. same stories being done again and again. but this one definatly stands out.
my only complaint about it would be that it's kinda of confusing sometimes. like the last chapter, when the seelie and the unseelie warrior ledgend was being explained? had not one fucking clue what you were talking about. and i love the seelie and unseelie world. so i really should have done.
after you've written something liek that, it's always a good idea to re-read it, except fromt he point of view of someone who doesn't know anything about the subject you're trying to explain. if it doesn't, then re-do it. and if it does, don't forget to pass it by your beta reader, because they might spot something you didn't.
but a very enjoyable fic. keep it up.
my only complaint about it would be that it's kinda of confusing sometimes. like the last chapter, when the seelie and the unseelie warrior ledgend was being explained? had not one fucking clue what you were talking about. and i love the seelie and unseelie world. so i really should have done.
after you've written something liek that, it's always a good idea to re-read it, except fromt he point of view of someone who doesn't know anything about the subject you're trying to explain. if it doesn't, then re-do it. and if it does, don't forget to pass it by your beta reader, because they might spot something you didn't.
but a very enjoyable fic. keep it up.
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, really really good. The more I read the more I want to find out what's going to happen next. Although at the least chapter I had to read twice to understand. But it is really good. Keep updating when you get the chance!!
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea! More! hehe, i am happy. It's really good and getting really good. I want more!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good. I enjoy reading it. As a matter of fact I am reading it past my bedtime. hehe, keep up the good work! Add more chapters soon!