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for I, Buffy

by LL72

person Oric13
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Reading about Buffy being gangbanged by a gang of very hot cheerleaders and her mom results in some pretty interesting mental imagery ;)
Nice work.
person Oric13
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Part 6 - My Visitors: Another chapter chock-full of hot lesbian anal action.
Unfortunately, it was also chock-full of spelling & grammar errors. So I strongly suggest that you beta-read your work before you post it 'cause this is really messing with the enjoyment of your fics.
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is a good story.
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story a lot. Thank you.
person Oric13
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving Joyce's new photography hobby :P
person Oric13
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter.
Too bad Buffy didn't have a handy camera present 'cause I'm sure Joyce would've loved to watch her little girl get banged by those two hot cheerleaders :P
person Dusel
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Buffy's such a slut in this story, will she get to fuck someone with a strap-on too?
person Oric13
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And now Joyce is fucking her little girl in front of a crowd... and it's only their second date ;)
I really like where this is going.
person Oric13
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter.
Who knew Joyce would be so kinky and dominant! Butt-fucking her daughter in the cemetery, taking naked pictures, making her walk home naked...
I also really like how Buffy is willing to do pretty much EVERYTHING to please her beloved mom.
Can't wait to see what kinda kink Joyce will think of next.
person quietone
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it, though I prefer third or second narrative, ya doing it well so far. more please