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Aww man! Just when it was getting good, Xander and Nathanial haven't even met yet! Youv'e done great with the mixing of the two universes, absolutely believable. A couple of spelling mistakes, but other than that a truely mesmerising story, really disappointed that it looks as though you have dropped it. Hope you decide to continue sometime.

oh wow, awesome start to this! can't wait to see what happens next, hope you find teh inspiration to work on this some more :)

this fiction rocking hard baby , i love xander and love neth . you rock i hope you dont get writers block.

This is a great start. I'm looking forward to seeing what Xander's role is in Anita's world.

Wow, i really like this idea. Your approach is unique so far, and the whole "Xander is an angel" thing really caught my interest. I like your explanations for the different souls and soul mates, and how you are going to amp up Xander's "The one who sees" powers, because i think they were totally underrated. I look forward to more, and seeing who his soul mate is... I predict Anita not liking him at all

AAARRRGgghhhhhhh! Its a cliff-hanger in the first chapter! lol. I'm loving it so far. I'm so wondering who's the soulmate! Need chapter 2