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I hope some day real life lets you write more on this.  Thank you for sharing what you have of it.

 

 

Wow that's some pretty heavy shit for life to throw at you. It certainly couldn't have been much fun to go through. Glad to hear that you're doing better though. Keep your chin up and please keep writing. I for one would greatly appreciate it. And I'm quite sure there are a LOT of others out there who feel the same. You have a gift with words. I look forward to reading more of your work. Peace and well wishes.

Angela

The story is very difficult to read, without periods at the end of sentences (among other issues).

So glad I found this story! I'm really enjoying it. Very beautifully written. I can feel Spike and Xander's pain.

absolutely loving the story so far :) hope you update soon

arg. i think i've read this about four times now. i always open it going 'what's this? i think i've read it...' and then bits come back, and i reread the whole thing and i get all 'arg!' again because it's not /done/. so arg. please update soon, this is interesting.~

Sweet! I really liked how you have made Angel and Spike/Will very...back the way they are susposed to be. Sire and Childe... Thank you for a great chapter. Thank you very much and Happy Holidays.

I have to say that your writing makes me wish that chapters went on forever but then you wouldn't have a life and I am not that selfish. But I really liked these chapters and I am so glad that you aren't making Spike a champion because I really want him around Xander for a long time. Even though I don't want you to kill off ANGEL. Thank you for a brilliant multitude of chapters.

I really love this story and I just don't understand why people are not reviewing this story and telling you how well you are doing. I try to review every story I read be it good or be it bad and this story is so great that people should really be telling you...sorry I just wanted to bitch I never understood how people could be so...lazy, I guess. But on with my review of both of the chapters, I like how you have made Spike in this story he is still 'Big Bad' but he is truly a vamp in love. And I like Giles in this one some stories tend to make him rather like an asshole but you are making him a reasonable but very caring guy. And I am so glad that you are bringing Angel...love him. One more thing I really like how you did the thing about Spike paying for Xander's medical...I mean come on someone who lives as long as a vampire should have money somewhere...And Spike was born in the time when people were just starting to invest all over the world. So thank you for that and sorry about the bitching. Also thank you for two great and engaging chapters.

God...I really like this story a lot. This is so engaging and entertaining that I just find myself being whisked away to the world that you have created. Thank you for a lovely chapter.