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Sorry derlich, got to disagree. This is much hotter. I can't wait for part 2.

Well now, how about that? A completely new Buffy/Dawn story! I love every single part of chapter 1! I don't know what it is, but writing Buffyverse stories seems to bring out your best. It's emotionally well written, you do a very good job of portraying Buffy as close to her character as possible in this specific scenario of yours. The first chapter was driven by emotions and plot development, which is something I really like.

I look forward to reading more of this story - am I right in assuming that the story will have seven chapters?

Well done!

good story i wonder what cool stuff dawn his in stole for buffy...