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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this good story with original idea .o)
Will be waiting for more .o)
Will be waiting for more .o)
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, thank you for finally updating this great story! I don't know why, but this seems to be the story where you put the most focus on the psychological effects the whole situation creates. And you're getting pretty good at it, if you really put your mind to it, you know...? ;-)
I look forward to reading more from this great story. Well done!
I look forward to reading more from this great story. Well done!
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE TRULY AN ARTIST. I LOVE THIS STORY. AND I THINK YOUR OTHER STORY IS GREAT TO. YOU REALLY CAPTURE THE EMOTION THAT BOTH ARE FEELING THROUGHOUT THE ORDEAL. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO PUT THE NEXT PART. I AM EAGERLY AWAITING IT. PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure you could pull it off, but ... you topped yourself (pun partially intended, after the fact). I do have to agree with an earlier commenter ... the sex is great, but ... watching and FEELING Buffy break down and accept her willing domination by Dawn is what really drives this story. Knowing what is happening to her, fighting it, and wanting to lose that fight ... that's Buffy's story here.
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely brilliant story - you are a great author in general.
I just recently started paying attention to the actual authors, and I noticed that your name was on all the stories on this site that I already liked beforehand.
This story is brilliantly hot, but your capablilites as a writer are just... well, ironically enough, they can't be written. 10/10
I just recently started paying attention to the actual authors, and I noticed that your name was on all the stories on this site that I already liked beforehand.
This story is brilliantly hot, but your capablilites as a writer are just... well, ironically enough, they can't be written. 10/10
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter (3)! I really enjoyed reading it. It's fun to see how you make the unconventional situation of a dominant Dawn and a sub Buffy work. Great to know you're writing again!
Please try to stick to the more psychological aspects of this story and don't start focusing too much on the sex itself. It's fun, of course, and well written, but in my opinion it should be a tool for or a consequence of the plot, not the main plot itself.
Again, well done!
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like part 3 a lot. Very hot. My only worry is you've not left much novelty for the next part. Dawn's done so much to her sister already that there's not all that much left. I hope the mention of a picnic suggests outdoor fun. Perhaps Buffy will be made to display herself in front of strangers - that sounds good. Perhaps she can be bent over a fallen tree and given another good spanking - she certainly deserves it.
There was a long break between parts 2 and 3, I hope you can concentrate hard a bring out the next part a little sooner.
There was a long break between parts 2 and 3, I hope you can concentrate hard a bring out the next part a little sooner.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, well done! I like how you're taking your time with this story, not rushing the "action", instead describing what's happening on an emotional level. I look forward to reading more of this story!
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
I'm eagerly awaiting the part where Dawnie is going to take her big sister's anal cherry.
I'm eagerly awaiting the part where Dawnie is going to take her big sister's anal cherry.
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Disciplining Dawn WAY more. You should keep up with that one.