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for Heel Puppy

by NoRefund

schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It's dumb but fun, you really understand the joy of a S&M relationship, I guess you've had some experience eh? ;) Could do with some Willow abuse though.
person whatweareafraidof
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story... i like how they said no hurt are puppy with out are say so.. and angle got kick in the nuts.. and how xander get a blowjob form buffy.. and how she said this is a way to think him for all he has done for her.
person Oric13
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is REALLY twisted stuff. My compliments :)
I very much liked the reveal that Willow has created a special Porn Puppy paysite to capture Buffy's degrading descent into slavery, and earning them a nice amount of cash on the side.
"Puppy" is probably gonna be putting on some extremely humiliating shows for her website.

Anyhow, good job. I'm curious to see where you're taking this story.
person hg556
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. If you're looking for suggestions, how about having Xander get involved in later chapters (preferably in a dominant role)? Like, Willow knows how much her best friend has always wanted Buffy, so she gives her to him to play with. And maybe he could play with Willow and Faith too! *eg*