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I think the rewrite has really tightened-up the chapter, but I know what you mean about introducing more characters so that you can take the story in new directions and introduce Buffy to new situations. That?s going to be interesting.

Good chapter.
Buffy is turning out to be one well-trained lil puppy.
I also liked the Faith/Willow romance; I feel it adds a bit of depth to the story.

Thanks Oric13, I thought it was time to mix things up a bit. I'm trying to add a little gravitas, if you have any ideas please let me know.

And zoogirl, i hope you do write a tale, let me know if I can help (depending on what the story is)if you're on the forum give me a PM, for some reason private messages aren't on the site, by anyway you can find me at http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showuser=14926 .

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Don?t get me wrong about the second half ? I think the story should go where you want it to go. I?ve been inspired to try to write my own story but it isn?t going very well. I?m just looking forward to the stuff you mentioned at the end of chapter 4.

Thanks zoogirl, yeah I was kind of in a sappy mood so I tried something different with the second half. But fear not, normal service will be resumed in the next chapter. If you got any suggestions I'd love to hear them.
Thanks for reviewing, I really do appreciate it.

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Like the new chapter five, especially the first half, and still looking forward to reading all the stuff still to come.

Fun chapter.
I'm curious to see what Giles & Tara will end up doing to Puppy.

I love this story, the best one I've read in ages. I hope there's lots more chapters to come.

very good story....


sorry about your housband... they cant use what you write again you... do you do some of this stuff in your RL

Just when you think that Buffy can't possibly be more humiliated, you manage to prove me wrong :)
Loved Buffy's slutty cheerleader song & dance number - my favourite scene in this story.
I also really like that despite loving to humiliate their Puppy, Willow and Faith obviously love her and are also protective of her (oh, and Angel could do with a good kick in the balls ;).
I hope you'll do some more depraved scenes of Buffy performing for the webcam.
Maybe Willow & Faith will do some kind of special contest for their Puppy paysite where the winner either gets to choose the kind of humiliating performance Buffy has to do next, or maybe he/she get to act out their twisted fantasy in person. Perhaps an essay contest describing a very special performance for their Puppy - maybe with a Christmas theme!
Heh. In that case there'll probably be an essay titled "Buffy the red-assed reingirl" ;)
Or Puppy decorated as a Christmas tree.
Or Buffy: Santa's Slutty Elf - a kinky treat for some of the naughtiest boys & girls members of their paysite.
Plenty of kinky possibilities there!