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Two huge problems with this...eating shit would lead to Buffy getting bad stomach aches, diarrhea, and possibly cholera. As for a diet mainly consisting of dog food...you would suffer from appetite fatigue. Your body and even your mind would literally reject your food even if you were starving because after a short period of time you just would not be able to stand anymore dog food. In terms of nutrition, though, you could survive if your body would actually consume it. It would not be ideal nutrition but people can survive without their food being ideal they just won't be in great health. Last big problem...and I've only read chapter 2 so far, but I highly doubt Buffy would permanently give up sleeping with her lover. It just doesn't fit her personality and doesn't fit her psychology.

any chance of an update soon? this is a tremendous story! what do Dawn and Joyce think of Buffy's choices? does Dawn even exist in this timeline? without vamps, etc. there's no Slayer, so no Key, so...? can't wait!!!!

This is in response to Chapter 8. I registered on the forum and tried to post but it wouldn?t let me, so I?ll put my message here. I?m not offering any real suggestions and I don?t want to cut in on the discussion already taking place about the future direction of the story. These are just a few opinions of my own. I think the story should go wherever NoRefund wants it to go.

If I was writing it, not that I?d be any good, I would have had Willow and Tara instead of Willow and Faith, and Tara would be the more dominant of the two. I just see Tara as a very strict dom. Within this story I wouldn?t have Willow as a sub. I think it works better the way it is. I do like the idea of using Buffy?s voice to tell the story in the house and using the author?s voice in the outside world. That would be a great contrast. I would keep Buffy?s life with her owners more of a secret and have her living a normal life outside, but also be subjected to disguised humiliations in public. I like the idea of Buffy working at the Doublemeat Palace. I?d get Jenny Calendar involved somewhere, definitely in a dom role. If I was going to introduce Dawn, I think I would also have her as a sub with Willow and Faith as her owners, perhaps separate to Buffy.

Buffy screwing her beloved plush pig Mr. Gordo in front of her owners and webcam was a very inspired scene :P

Great to see you back. Mr Gordo was a fun diversion, I didn?t see that coming. It was the best bit. You mentioned some future ponygirl training in a previous chapter. I imagined Jenny Calendar or someone like that, so Spike came as a surprise.

For me, the problem is that after chapter 1, it is difficult to remember that Puppy is Buffy. The original girl is totally absorbed in the new personality. I would have preferred if the slavery was only for part of the time - the rest of the time she was a normal girl. I think this would be much more humiliating. I know its too late to change now, but perhaps you could do more to link Puppy to her former life.

I do like the story though. Please carry on.

Awesome story. I love the way you emphasize the love alongside the humiliation. Violation by Mr. Gordo was a masterstroke.

If I had a criticism, it's that I see Willow more as a sub than a domme. But hey, that's just me:)

Am I the Buffy? Now wouldn't that be something ;) Nah I'm more the Willow character than anything. Sorry I've been away for so long, it may take a while to get back into the swing of things but I'll get on it as soon as I can. A mate for Buffy? Hmmm, that could be fun. Thanks for the suggestion, and thanks for reading and reviewing, feedback is always appreciated.

Can we expect more soon? I really hope so! BTW you said you write about what you know are you the Buffy? Willow/Faith? Joyce? Jonathan? Other? In any event, may I humbly make a suggestion for the essay contest? Since Willow and Faith are getting married it seems unfair that Puppy gets left out of the matrimonial fun. Maybe she should also get a mate! (Pinky? Another Pet? An actual dog?) Just a thought... ;) N-E-wayz, I leave this in your more than capable hands/paws lol looking 4wrd 2 chap7.

Whoa, lotsa stuff happening!
Mistress Willow using Puppy as a chair seemed especially inspired :)