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by clairsoftley

schedule June 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You never finished it!!!
person SpanderFan
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Review submitted 6/10/2010

"Becoming" has potential to be a good story, but it DESPERATELY needs to be Beta'd. Please seriously consider having someone look at it for grammar, punctuation and run-on sentences.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sick! *rushes off to make some cookies* They're not as good as Willow's but I think you'll still like them. ^^ glad to hear you're recovering and it's nice to see an update! I love this story. Although I am a bit confused as to the Spike + Sun= non-splody... but that's fine! As long as this story is still going! I love it! ... and I already said that. lol well I'll be watching for updates and I hope you're feeling better!
person chelzi
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. swine flu, really? glad you're feeling better. i can't remember if i reviewed this before, so i'll say this anyway: i was really excited when the first word to catch my attention upon opening this story was my username! muy exciting. if i catch this in the updates section, i'll be sure to keep looking, just to see where this is going to go. because, obviously xander, oops indeed.~
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback Emma,

To answer your question no I'm not done playing with my boys yet. Now that I'm convalescing I've got plenty of time to fill so it's likely I'm going to hammer out quite a bit over the next few days.

I've emailed you some info on stories I think you might like, check them out and let me know what you think.

Thanks again for the ongoing support
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good story...So many possiblilities for the next chapters. I really like how you have done Angel and Spike. They are really great personalities in this story. And I look forward to more. Thank you for a great read.
person emma
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is so fucking god!!!!!!!!!!1

is it complete?????

if not can u mail me when you post new chapters?????????

oh and could you recommend other xander/spike stories????

thanx
bloody awesome you are!!!!!!!!1
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you to Xillah who pointed out the formatting issues with my first posting of this story, hopefully this reformmated version is a little easier on the eye. Hope you give it a go now and enjoy.
person xillah
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh, yeah... I would have really liked to read this but the lack of paragraph breaks makes it too much of an eye strain. =(