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for The Queen Bitch Of Sunnydale

by ToughLove

person Oric13
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot punishment/fuck session with Snyder, and I sure like the way he send her home :)
Faith's first "live" performance for her new website was pretty good, although I do feel that for her very first show her owners should've come up with something more special. Especially Willow is more imaginative than this. Also, $10,- seems pretty damn cheap to watch the once sassy Slayer being turned into masochistic totally degraded fuck-toy, but perhaps her owners feel that since Faith is nothing but a cheap slut this should be reflected in her membership fees ;)
person Oric13
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't been in a fanfic-y mood for about a month, so it's been a while since I checked out this series.
And today I saw there were three new chapters for me to read!
Very nice.

My favourite of the three was definitely part 3 of School Days with the enormous amount of public humiliation Faith had to endure.
Part 2 of School Days was nice, but simple F/f, D/s at this point just won't do it anymore for me, especially since this series is already chockful of that.
Buffy Off The Leash was a whole lot tamer than I expected from you, especially since you had made Buffy behave a bit too sadistic for my taste previously.
It was a pretty good chapter, but frankly after having her crawl around naked at Sunnydale High and running naked thru most of Sunnydale, that little photoshoot, which as a much earlier chapter would've worked really well, felt kinda anti-climactic at this point.

Still, overall a good job.

person Oric13
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Food fucking isn't really my kinda kink, and letting one "sub" dominate another sub doesn't really work so well IMO.
Still an enjoyable chapter, but nowhere near as good as the previous one.
person Oric13
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Buffy's such a bitch to her bitch ;)
Awesome chapter.
person Oric13
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another enjoyable chapter.
I liked that Faith was so hard up for cock that even principal Snyder's cock would do :)
Faith being lend out the Cordelia and her "Cordettes" seemed a bit odd, as there was no real reason mentioned for this, but it was till a pretty hot scene.
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story, thank you.
person Oric13
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now that's one helluva fucking Faith received.
I doubt anyone has ever done her better than THAT.
Very hot chapter, well done!
person Oric13
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Willow double-fisting Faith! Love it :)
I also enjoyed Ms. Gwendolyn Post being transformed into a lesbian bitch.
Of course, in reality this wouldn't be very smart of Joyce considering the Watcher's Council could and would crush her if they found out about this, but in smutfic world it was fun to read.
person whatweareafraidof
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story is xander going to get any in this story.. great joyce killed anglus
person Oric13
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Buffy and her mom really put poor faith thru the wringer.
I tend to thoroughly enjoy the humiliation aspect in these kinda stories, so it will come as no surprise that I really liked the part where Buffy takes kinky nudie pics of Faith to show to her friends at school.
I really wished you'd expanded a bit more on this idea instead of focusing most of your effort in the scene where Joyce & Buffy DP Faith (although that was pretty damn hot as well).
I also liked that you ended the story again on the (now infamous) phone table near the door (that must be one sturdy phone table, btw ;) the exhibition/humiliation aspect always gives these scenes some extra spice.
Maybe next time some neighbor or a visitor will catch Faith performing on the phone table.