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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Part 19 - Chick with a Dick: Heh. Now this is something new.
I'm usually not that into the whole dickgirl genre, but Cordy sure makes for a sexy dickgirl.
And picturing her fucking Faith with her big dick makes for some hot visuals.
I'm usually not that into the whole dickgirl genre, but Cordy sure makes for a sexy dickgirl.
And picturing her fucking Faith with her big dick makes for some hot visuals.
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 - A Summers Christmas Party: Damn, those old bitches really put Faith thru the wringer!
There's something strangely exciting about those sadistic hags having their wicked way with a gorgeous sexy teen like Faith.
Good ending with the various whippings on the busty brunette's tender charms and her degrading masturbation exhibition.
Yet another well-written arousing chapter - well done, Tom.
There's something strangely exciting about those sadistic hags having their wicked way with a gorgeous sexy teen like Faith.
Good ending with the various whippings on the busty brunette's tender charms and her degrading masturbation exhibition.
Yet another well-written arousing chapter - well done, Tom.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!!!! Nice chapter, it always brightens my day to see another chapter for this story. Faith & Giles maybe??? (I'm a massive fan of that pairing)
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 - Two Naughty Nurses: Even though the whole "naughty nurses" scenario is probably one of the most used sexual roleplaying games (alongside "naughty catholic schoolgirl") you managed to write an entertaining take on it.
I sometimes feel like you kinda rush thru a scene or a chapter, but that definitely wasn't the case here as the naughty nurses performed plenty of kinky exams with their sexy patient (and it also seemed well-edited, which is also a big plus).
Good job, Tom.
I sometimes feel like you kinda rush thru a scene or a chapter, but that definitely wasn't the case here as the naughty nurses performed plenty of kinky exams with their sexy patient (and it also seemed well-edited, which is also a big plus).
Good job, Tom.
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, by now it's gotten a little boring. I don't understand your obsession on graphic strap-on scenes and very limited male involvement but never large scale male involvement; it's a theme prevalent across your body of works. Which... well, is interchangable. There's nothing that really differentiates between this and the last Faith-bashing fic you did. Hell, if I was the owner here, I could probably swap chapters between the two without people noticing.
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong 'cause the sex was pretty hot in this chapter, but what happened to the roleplaying idea we discussed?
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's quite a transformation Tara made in such a short time. Looks like Faith is really good at giving a gal confidence :)
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.... I love this! Can't wait to read more!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent striptease scene!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!
I really like how Faith has gradually developed a huge crush on Principal Snyder, of all people, considering that under normal circumstances she'd spurn that little troll. I guess she really enjoys having his big dick in her otherwise mostly clam diet ;)
The scene where Joyce and Snyder fuck Faith together was pretty damn hot.
And naturally, I really enjoyed Buffy & Willow class assignment - very well done. Although it would've been even better if they'd made Faith do other (kinkier) stuff besides fucking herself with a vibrator in front of the class. I'd also would've liked to read a few more details about Faith's photo-shoots & movies for the website.
Overall a good solid chapter, though it definitely could've used a thorough beta-reading before posting as I spotted several glaring grammar errors (some of which caused lines of dialogue to make no sense).
I really like how Faith has gradually developed a huge crush on Principal Snyder, of all people, considering that under normal circumstances she'd spurn that little troll. I guess she really enjoys having his big dick in her otherwise mostly clam diet ;)
The scene where Joyce and Snyder fuck Faith together was pretty damn hot.
And naturally, I really enjoyed Buffy & Willow class assignment - very well done. Although it would've been even better if they'd made Faith do other (kinkier) stuff besides fucking herself with a vibrator in front of the class. I'd also would've liked to read a few more details about Faith's photo-shoots & movies for the website.
Overall a good solid chapter, though it definitely could've used a thorough beta-reading before posting as I spotted several glaring grammar errors (some of which caused lines of dialogue to make no sense).