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rawr!

stopped at all fangy and grr! hello?! remember me? the girl whose inner muse would scream in disbelief when you'd leave both of us with a cliffhanger like that?

hi! :D i'm back! missed this and loved it too! i was really hoping she wouldn't be all not-knowing (buffy speak) that he was a vampire... thank God she knew and told him (which is probably why my muse isn't complaining half as much as it would). i'm also glad that you got that out of the way... wouldn't want any potential relationship to be ruined with a simple "you're a vampire?!"

anyway, calmness aside, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT: NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!! (^_^)

Firstly, knowing that English is not your first language impresses me even further. You have a better grasp of it than some whose native tongue it is, so kudos to you!! ^.^ I loved Buffy's verbal sparring with her friends. I am wondering though, if the 'spank your inner moppet' line was yours or Joss'? Either way it was a great line. Stupid friends for seeing how much pain Buffy was in and how much anguish she is suffering. Some friends they are. As always, I love reading Spike's innner monologue. You do a bang up job with him, he is very in character, you've captured him quite nicely. I love how he is so enamoured with Buffy, and is a bit confused as to why he is so taken with her. And of COURSE Buffy knew he was a vamp. How could she not, being that she is a slayer and all. I loved her casual admittance of it to him. I can only imagine what he is thinking, and I can't wait to read about his reaction next chapter. As usual, this was bloody fantastic, and I apologize for it taking me so long to read and review!!

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Ero

I'm really enjoying this story! Keep going!

well, this is looking really good so far. i'll try to be back for more, because it seems worth the read.

i feel i'd rather spike be more spike and less will, but if he were, he wouldn't be here, or willing, to go with buffy. though, buffy discovering his undeadness is going to put a hamper on the situation.

be sure to keep writing, because you've got talent, and the story is good.~

So sorry ducky for not reading and reviewing sooner...been a bit busy. I love your easy use of british slang and colloquisms...sometimes it reads as stilted and forced in stories, but that is not the case here. Are you from the UK? Poor Spike, he's being tormented to death by Buffy, Angel is behaving like a prat because Buffy wants nothing to do with him. Hmmm, I wonder if she knows Spike is a vamp? She's fought enough to know...yes? And bugger, they were interrupted....by another vamp I assume? Can't wait to read more!!

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Tara

Gaah woman!! how could you leave it at that chapter!!! this is great! i can't wait to read the next chapter!! Everything is detailed and well written, and i have to admit, i have a huge spike/buffy weakness. ^.^

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Tara

i just want to omnomnom spikie lol, i love this i hope you plan to continue it ^_^