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come on! please update soon! what happens next! please!

compleatly over the moon hooked on this wounderful story! please update soon!

Hey, plot! That's different for a fic on this site..

I love the concept you've developed here. It has a lot of potential. The possible triangle/jealousy angle to get under Artemis' skin is a bit of genius. I would love to see this develop further. Especially with a lemon later on, or several, interspersed with the rest of the plot story. If you just want to tell the story without sex scenes, that would still be cool, and I'd still love to read it.

When do you think you're going to be ready to update? I already know the answer: Not nearly soon enough! Haha!

I hope you continue this one!
AssembledCarbon

Thanks for the update. I hope to see more soon.

Ok now I am really feeling sorry for Artemis and Velma. I like the chemistry you have got going between Buffy and Theron. Great updates

Looks good so far. Update sooon please, Im curious as to what will happen next

Thanks for a new chapter. I hope to see more soon.

I am so hooked. Please keep updating this is awesome.

Well you are off and running with another very intriguing story.

this is so exciting! and so good!