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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nine was pretty funny, actually. I liked Cupid's tricky revenge for the door.
Ten had a considerable pick-up in typos and bad grammar. I think it may have been rush-posted??? That deer was incredibly strange, I'm not sure what to think about it. It's brought Buffy and Artemis together; I wonder how well they'll get along? hahaha.
Still enjoying this fic throughly
Ten had a considerable pick-up in typos and bad grammar. I think it may have been rush-posted??? That deer was incredibly strange, I'm not sure what to think about it. It's brought Buffy and Artemis together; I wonder how well they'll get along? hahaha.
Still enjoying this fic throughly
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whicked good!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh thats mean! but oh so god!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Sad what happened to Velma. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work :)
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you've done thus far. I was so worried when Buffy was stuck with Bacchus! Glad Artemis got her out of there so fast.
This story continues to captivate my interest as it develops relationships like Buffy/Theron and Buffy/Artemis.
Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more! :)
This story continues to captivate my interest as it develops relationships like Buffy/Theron and Buffy/Artemis.
Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more! :)
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't Stop now!!!! I'm Hooked!!!!!!!
Who will Buffy choose?
Will Artemis be able to deal with Buffy and Theron?????
SOOOOOOO GOOD!
Who will Buffy choose?
Will Artemis be able to deal with Buffy and Theron?????
SOOOOOOO GOOD!
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.
I've got a picture in my head of Buffy getting pregnant from Theron.
Scary baby pictures. :-)
I like the pairing Buffy/Theron maybe if Buffy returns Theron goes also to Sunnydale ?
I've got a picture in my head of Buffy getting pregnant from Theron.
Scary baby pictures. :-)
I like the pairing Buffy/Theron maybe if Buffy returns Theron goes also to Sunnydale ?
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The chemistry and dialogue between Buffy and Theron is wonderful. Please keep the chapters coming, I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Can't wait to read more.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story. I think I am voting for a Buffy/ Theron and an Artemis/ Velma pairing.