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for Warrior for the working day

by LL72

person Doug
schedule April 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Its been a long while since I first started reading this, and having just read all 10 chps and everything within, this was a nice one.
With all the characters you pulled out (Amy?) I wondered when Dru or Anya might show up. Thanks.
person Listener
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a really creative plot, and although I think it wrapped up a bit too quickly I really liked how you ended it. Some of the sex scenes were a little repetitive and I've never been much for inc but otherwise this was good.
person LL72
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep that's it over. I might do a sequel at some point if I get an idea, but it'll be a different story. Glad you liked the ending.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was awesome to see Buffy kick butt in ch. 10. Great conclusion?
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, i loved the addition of the Wakefield twin in chapter three.
Child hood memories came flooding back.
Lol
person LL72
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Theb Wakefield twins are definetely some underused tottie - especially given the potential - so I thought it'd be nice to have them guest star
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There is so many interesting things going on.
Please continue.
Good Job.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems interesting. I like it.
Good Job.